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John Patrick Weiss's avatar

Great post. If we strip away the duplicate advice from all these fine writers, here are ten takeaways:

1. Write. One word after another. Finish what you start.

2. Be clear and simple. Short words. Short sentences. No jargon.

3. Cut ruthlessly. Kill clichΓ©s, adverbs, filler, and anything readers skip.

4. Start close to the action. Skip prologues, weather, and throat-clearing.

5. Make every sentence work. Reveal character or advance the story.

6. Give characters desire and trouble. Wanting + conflict = story.

7. Write for one true readerβ€”often yourself. Not the crowd.

8. Revise with distance. Read aloud. Put it away. Seek honest feedback.

9. Read constantly. Great writing grows from great reading.

10. Protect the joy and discipline. Show up daily. Trust your voice.

Ellen from Endwell's avatar

Really enjoyed this. So much invaluable experience and wisdom here. Thanks for doing this, Paul.

Angela Treat Lyon's avatar

So many gems! Thanks. Some made me laugh out loud - I love that.

Loved your copy story, too. Good info.

Angela Treat Lyon's avatar

You always have different, interesting stuff - I appreciate that!

Marilyn  Karins  Stade's avatar

Great Post

James Ron's avatar

Wow, this is great, Paul. Thank you.